Michelle Knight. Writer, photographer, programmer, truck driver and general, all round nut case. Life is a journey and that's what this blog will probably end up being. Let's see where we go, eh? ;-)
Starting to get in to this again. The language jumps aren't making for a smooth read. I'm talking about the slang and characters where English isn't the first language.
Some of this works, like the dialogue in the left bubble. Some of it doesn't, like the top right bubble. And shortening trouble to troub, is only throwing me further out of the groove.
Unfortunately, they've done this in the set up pages, which is part of what didn't help me to get in to it, the first time I read it. Fortunately, on the second read, it is less of an annoyance, because I know what's happening next. But it doesn't help.
And... do all thugs wear Adidas or something?