Michelle's corner

OK, Spoiler.THIS IS BOOK 4 in a series.

I'm going to try and put this after the page break, but here's the first couple of pages, somehow, I'm not 100% of how to do this, so this first attempt might not quite work as I intended.

I wanted a button that people had to click on, but I guess that until I learn how to do that, an image that people would have to consciously expand will do for now.

This is a picture which you're probably going to have to right-click on, and expand. But this is the average kind of thing that's come back from the editor. There are a few pages heavier, a few pages lighter, but this is the result of the checking that's gone on and the progress that I've made over the last year, even as a dyslexic.

It's also the result of checking the script on different devices, so different faults show through to me, as well as the feedback that was returned from the Alpha readers. The questions they've raised, the bits they felt were missing... yeah, so I've got sixty eight pages of this to work through this weekend.

Not all of it are straight grammar things, some of the notes are questions on motivation, things which didn't, "flow," for her, and that sort of thing which is going to require a bit of thought.

So, hey, if you're one of the few people reading the series, or intending to read it someday... bookmark this and come back to it later, as the book starts with a recap and lays the whole previous three books bare :-)